The skyping in sounds terrible. Mulele sounds like a cylone from the old BSG show. Tim, quality on your end is much better.

Muelel, telling someone to be “more aggressive” with their comedy means nothing. What do you mean by “more aggressive?”

Liked the comment on “your first idea not being your best.” Too many times writers hold their ideas as being too sacred. Great book on comedy writing is “The Comic’s Toolbox.” This book gives great exercises on comedy writing in general. And specific exercises on character building, joke writing, etc.